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Re: Hi
Hi! My name is Lisa. Well actually my given name is Elizabeth but I really feel like that name is much too formal, so I go by Lisa. During middle ...
Sep 27, 2010 -
Re: To You, Writer's Block
Hello! I will be reviewing your poetry today. I want to start off by saying that I hate poetry, so the fact that I not only read your poem but ...
Sep 25, 2010 -
Re: New kid :D
Hello Rhani! Welcome to YWS. Since you're from Australia do you ever have Americans ask you silly questions like "Have you ever fought a kangaroo?" or "Have you ever met ...
Sep 24, 2010 -
Re: Sunburns
This is an interesting metaphor, but I like it. I think that is what good poetry does, makes you look at something old from a fresh perspective. So kudos on ...
Sep 23, 2010 -
Re: I've Already Tried ~contest entry~
Well, I think you have done a good job with this tender subject. Your descriptions were vivid and the emotion was realistic. I hope this isn't something that you've experienced ...
Sep 23, 2010 -
Re: Blood Type (Open to all!)
Name: Mark Bates Age: 21 Species: Human Blood Type: B Side: Against Appearance: Dirty blonde hair, often styled in a fo-hawk. Green eyes, tan complexion, no facial hair. Tall and ...
Sep 23, 2010 -
Re: Name the Character Above You
Charlotte or Catherine. My character is a 21 year old male. He is easily angered and can become quite abusive towards his girlfriend. Stubborn and conceited. If something is going ...
Sep 23, 2010 -
Re: The Pain of Glass
Well, I really liked this story, the characters were so interesting. I think my favorites were Violet and Dawn. You did such a marvelous job describing all of the other ...
Sep 23, 2010 -
Re: Hi everyone!!
Welcome to YWS, I will be your guide. You may call me Lisa, since that is my name. Now let's get busy, we have a lot to cover in a ...
Sep 22, 2010 -
Re: Hello, hello~
Hello, hello! My name is Lisa. *bows dramatically* Welcome to YWS, I hope you like it. What is your favorite food? If you could be any character in any story ...
Sep 22, 2010 -
Re: Er...Hi!...?
Hi, my name is Lisa and I have come to welcome you to YWS. Welcome. If you want to improve your writing than you have come to the right place. ...
Sep 22, 2010 -
Re: What ho? A figure on the horizon?!
Hello! *waves excitedly* My name is Lisa. You can call me Lisa. Ha ha, welcome to YWS! We love fresh meat...I mean noobs. Have you checked out the chat yet? ...
Sep 22, 2010 -
Re: The "I'm Back" Thread
HEEEEEEEY! I'm back.
Sep 22, 2010 -
Re: *spasm* Hello.
Welcome to YWS! It really is quite addicting. I have included links to some of my favorite places here on YWS, check them out at your leisure! Joining groups is ...
Sep 22, 2010 -
Re: An Ethics Lesson...
This poem made me laugh, hopefully that was effect you were going for. I appreciate the effort you went to make sure that your poem rhymed, just remember that poems ...
Sep 22, 2010
